Thesis: Barefoot water ski is a extreme sport but, against of people think, the risks and injuries do not depend of any of following factors: age, gender and ski level.
Hi Ms. Holly, my thesis changed as: Sky flying is exciting and magical; however, it is the most dangerous extreme sport due to the high frequency of accidents & mortality.
Extreme skiing is popular sport in the northern countries, it needs flexible body to practices it, and you must to be brave, because it needs extreme jumping and movement.
motocross as a one of the famous extreme spots has engaged audience , companies , and T.V channels for a number of significant reason that shows in the history of this activity .
Extreme sports give exciting challenges for the body and mind also show the braveheart for people. Rock climbing is one of the extreme sports because it has a lot of challenging with yourself, people and rocks mountains. Rock climbers must know the correct climbing techniques and safety precautions with certified equipment.
Hang Gliding is an extreme sport not only because of the accidents that have occurred, but also the risk which each person assumes and the environment where is practiced.
Sky surfing is a combination between sky sports features and water sports features. Moreover, it is considered as one of the riskiest forms of skydiving; However, the equipment and process between sky surfing and skydiving are different.
As Wakeboarding is one of the most fetal extreme sports, riders should prepare their physical and mentality properly before wakeboarding to avoid unexpected accidents and loss.
This is a good start but we need a better thesis statement. You can talk about the history and/or why people do it in your introduction. But your thesis has to control the rest of the presentation. So something like this: Base jumping is an extreme sport because of X, Y and Z. And you explain X, Y and Z in the body of your presentation.
Scuba diving is considered an extreme sport because of the accident, the sea predators. However, when you dive, you can discover what the other seventy-one percent of the Earth looks like.
Many of us think that Extreme Skiing is dangerous due to the serious injuries caused by it. Some, in the other hand, consider extreme skiing as a very interesting sport.
How about: "There are two different thoughts about Extreme Skiing: one is that it is dangerous due to the serious injuries caused by it, the other is that it is interesting and worth to be tried"
Scuba diving is one of the most interesting extreme sports which leads you to explore underwater world. There are many kind of adventures; however, it still has a risk.
Thesis: Barefoot water ski is a extreme sport but, against of people think, the risks and injuries do not depend of any of following factors: age, gender and ski level.
ReplyDeleteBarefoot water skiing is an extreme sport; however, contrary to popular belief...
DeleteThis sounds like it will be interesting. You have piqued my curiosity. You are good to go.
Although the risks of death and serious injury remain, the popularity and growth of sky flying continues to increase internationally.
ReplyDeleteAre you going to explain why the popularity of sky flying continues to increase?
DeleteHi Ms. Holly, my thesis changed as: Sky flying is exciting and magical; however, it is the most dangerous extreme sport due to the high frequency of accidents & mortality.
DeleteOkay. Sounds good.
DeleteExtreme skiing is popular sport in the northern countries, it needs flexible body to practices it, and you must to be brave, because it needs extreme jumping and movement.
ReplyDeleteSo this presentation will be about the requirements necessary to do extreme skiing? Please rewrite this thesis statement to make it clearer.
DeleteEven though the risk practicing it, BMX is an enjoyable extreme sport which could be beneficial because of some reasons (the reasons are coming soon)
ReplyDeleteEven though there are risks involved, BMX has several benefits for those who do it.
DeleteOkay.
motocross as a one of the famous extreme spots has engaged audience , companies , and T.V channels for a number of significant reason that shows in the history of this activity .
ReplyDeleteThere are several reasons why motocross has engaged audiences, corporate sponsors and the media.
DeleteOkay.
Drifting is an interesting and exciting forms of motorsports, however, it has many negative effects for several reasons.
ReplyDelete...however, there are many negative consequences.
DeleteOkay.
Extreme sports give exciting challenges for the body and mind also show the braveheart for people. Rock climbing is one of the extreme sports because it has a lot of challenging with yourself, people and rocks mountains. Rock climbers must know the correct climbing techniques and safety precautions with certified equipment.
ReplyDeleteI just want your thesis, not the whole introduction.
DeleteIs your thesis that in order to do rock climbing, you must know the correct climbing techniques and take the necessary safety precautions?
Hang Gliding is an extreme sport not only because of the accidents that have occurred, but also the risk which each person assumes and the environment where is practiced.
ReplyDeleteSounds interesting.
DeleteThere are three main reasons why people practices rock climbing.
ReplyDeleteNice and clear!
DeleteSky surfing is a combination between sky sports features and water sports features. Moreover, it is considered as one of the riskiest forms of skydiving; However, the equipment and process between sky surfing and skydiving are different.
ReplyDeleteSky surfing differs from skydiving in terms of the equipment, the process, and ________.
DeleteIn fact, barefoot water skiing is one of most interesting extreme sport even though it's very dangerous,and has many limit.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean by "interesting?"
DeleteThis thesis isn't clear. Try again.
As Wakeboarding is one of the most fetal extreme sports, riders should prepare their physical and mentality properly before wakeboarding to avoid unexpected accidents and loss.
ReplyDeleteSounds interesting.
DeleteStreet luge is an extreme sport. It includes speed as well as taking risks and accidents are likely to occur.
ReplyDeleteThis can be part of your introduction but it is not a thesis. Try again.
DeleteI would like to share with you what I have found about Base Jumping: when it started, why it is an extreme sport, and why people go Base Jumping.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start but we need a better thesis statement. You can talk about the history and/or why people do it in your introduction. But your thesis has to control the rest of the presentation. So something like this: Base jumping is an extreme sport because of X, Y and Z. And you explain X, Y and Z in the body of your presentation.
DeleteSpeed Sailing is one of the extreme sports in the world.Sail, board and GPS units are the most important equipment for the sailor to sail fast.
ReplyDeleteThis is not a thesis. Try again.
DeleteMixed martial arts is full contact combat sport that allows the use of both striking and grappling techniques, both standing and on the ground.
ReplyDeleteThis is good for the introduction but its not a thesis statement.
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DeleteYour thesis cannot be a question! It has to be a statement. Either it is more dangerous or it's not.
DeleteEven though Hang gliding is freedom to fly to the sky, it's one of the dangerous extreme sports.
ReplyDeleteThis is not a thesis statement.
DeleteHow about: Hang gliding is an extreme sport due to X, Y, and Z.
There are several reasons why Hang Gliding is one of the dangerous extreme sports
DeleteOkay, so long as the reasons are not the obvious ones.
DeleteScuba diving is considered an extreme sport because of the accident, the sea predators. However, when you dive, you can discover what the other seventy-one percent of the Earth looks like.
ReplyDeleteThis is not a good thesis because its too specific. The thesis needs to be more general.
DeleteMany of us think that Extreme Skiing is dangerous due to the serious injuries caused by it. Some, in the other hand, consider extreme skiing as a very interesting sport.
ReplyDeleteThis is not a thesis. Please try again.
DeleteHow about: "There are two different thoughts about Extreme Skiing: one is that it is dangerous due to the serious injuries caused by it, the other is that it is interesting and worth to be tried"
DeleteHow about comparing extreme skiing with normal skiing?
DeleteThesis: Extreme skiing differs from normal skiing in 3 important ways: X, Y, and Z.
Scuba diving is one of the most interesting extreme sports which leads you to explore underwater world. There are many kind of adventures; however, it still has a risk.
ReplyDeleteThis is not a clear thesis statement. Please try again.
DeleteEven though scuba diving has a risk it can be explored as an adventure and equipment itself is really interesting.
ReplyDeleteI still don't understand the main idea. Is this about showing us the equipment?
DeleteBarefoot water skiing isn't influence by age or sex,but still not everyone can do it.Here are three reason can explain why is elite sport.
ReplyDeleteOkay, so your main idea is that there are 3 reasons why barefoot water skiing is an elite sport.
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