Topic : His thinking about multivitamin.Main idea : Multivitamin is helpful in some point of life.
a vitamin COULD be helpful.Good
Topic: Vitamins could be better for my health.Main idea: A daily multivitamin pill can complement the amount of vitamins that my health needs.
Good, but your topic is also your main idea.The topic would be "taking vitamins."
Topic: multivitamins. Main idea: even though you consider yourself as a helthy person, the multivitamins can positively effect on your body and keep your weight up.
Topic: Multivitamin Advantages.Main Idea: Multivitamin provides our body of nutrition which help to keep it healthy.
Okay, but more specifically it's about this guy choosing to take a multi-vitamin.
Topic vitamins and minerals are importantMain idea:vitamins and minerals are good for healthy
topic is NOT a sentence!
Topic: MultivitaminMain idea: I should take a multivitamin pill every day.
topic: multivitaminMain Idea: multivitamin supplement improve your health
COULD improve his health
Topic: MultivitaminMain idea: Eating healthy food is not enough for the body to get enough vitamins
The main idea is that this guy thinks he should take a multivitamin.
Topic multivitaminMain ideaMultivitamin has had a significant impact in healthy body .
Main idea is too general. This paragraph is all about this one specific guy's decision to take a vitamin (you should have circled I I I I I ).
the topic: MultivitaminMain idea: The consumption of a lot of the body's energy requires not only eating plenty of different kinds of foods,but also requires taking the pill at least one of vitamins daily to keep the weight up.
Your main idea is almost longer than the original paragraph!(I appreciate your "not only... but also.")
thank you for your notice.
Topic: MultivitaminMain idea: Multivitamin is necessary for his body.
Topic : His thinking about multivitamin.
ReplyDeleteMain idea : Multivitamin is helpful in some point of life.
a vitamin COULD be helpful.
DeleteGood
Topic: Vitamins could be better for my health.
ReplyDeleteMain idea: A daily multivitamin pill can complement the amount of vitamins that my health needs.
Good, but your topic is also your main idea.
DeleteThe topic would be "taking vitamins."
Topic: multivitamins.
ReplyDeleteMain idea: even though you consider yourself as a helthy person, the multivitamins can positively effect on your body and keep your weight up.
Topic: Multivitamin Advantages.
ReplyDeleteMain Idea: Multivitamin provides our body of nutrition which help to keep it healthy.
Okay, but more specifically it's about this guy choosing to take a multi-vitamin.
DeleteTopic vitamins and minerals are important
ReplyDeleteMain idea:vitamins and minerals are good for healthy
topic is NOT a sentence!
DeleteTopic: Multivitamin
ReplyDeleteMain idea: I should take a multivitamin pill every day.
topic: multivitamin
ReplyDeleteMain Idea: multivitamin supplement improve your health
COULD improve his health
DeleteTopic: Multivitamin
ReplyDeleteMain idea: Eating healthy food is not enough for the body to get enough vitamins
The main idea is that this guy thinks he should take a multivitamin.
DeleteTopic
ReplyDeletemultivitamin
Main idea
Multivitamin has had a significant impact in healthy body .
Main idea is too general. This paragraph is all about this one specific guy's decision to take a vitamin (you should have circled I I I I I ).
Deletethe topic: Multivitamin
ReplyDeleteMain idea: The consumption of a lot of the body's energy requires not only eating plenty of different kinds of foods,but also requires taking the pill at least one of vitamins daily to keep the weight up.
Your main idea is almost longer than the original paragraph!
Delete(I appreciate your "not only... but also.")
thank you for your notice.
DeleteTopic: Multivitamin
ReplyDeleteMain idea: Multivitamin is necessary for his body.